Some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe its good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Most create more understanding and it
people
argue that always make friends
who match with
your mindset. WhileChange preposition
apply
,
others think that select the Remove the comma
apply
friends
who contradict with
their Change preposition
apply
opinions
. In my view, every one
has Replace the word
everyone
a unique qualities
but I prefer to make a Correct the article-noun agreement
a unique quality
unique qualities
friend
who always agree
with your Change the verb form
agrees
thoughts
.
This
can be seen that the people
who always agree with your thoughts
will be most
found Replace the word
mostly
close
Add the comma(s)
,close
friends
. For
instance
most Add a comma
,instance
of
Change preposition
apply
people
love to Add an article
the people
share
their feelings
with those friends
who have the same opinion. This
will create a strong bond between both people
. Moreover
, it will help people
in difficult times and they feel more comfortable to share
their problems with their friends
and they hope that they will get positive
response from them Add an article
a positive
also
, they find their emotional satisfaction from their guidance. one of the research shows that the friends
who have same
believes found long-lasting relationship with each other and it is difficult for them to forget each other.
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the same
On the other hand
, its
a good idea to make Replace the word
it's
it is
friends
who contradict with
your Change preposition
apply
opinions
because when your friend
disagree
with your Change the verb form
disagrees
thoughts
he will share
his own prospective
and it will help Correct your spelling
perspective
people
to know that he is right also
, it will led
to Change the verb form
lead
be led
broad
vision and enhance your knowledge. But sometimes it may result in Correct article usage
a broad
seperation
because when Correct your spelling
separation
arguements
start between two Correct your spelling
arguments
people
and everyone is supporting their point of view it may sometimes convert into fights and will never see each other.
In my opinion, I would say that friends
with same
Correct article usage
the same
feelings
and thoughts
are found the best friends
forever Also
, they will enjoy together and share
their feelings
without hesitating,
because they feel secure Remove the comma
apply
also
, blindly trust each other and know that he will never diclose
his personal life to Correct your spelling
disclose
stranger
. Add an article
a stranger
In
Change preposition
As
the
result, they are having a strong bond Correct article usage
a
between
each other and Change preposition
with
thses
kind of friendships will found Correct your spelling
these
long -lasting
.
To sum up, I believe that Add a hyphen
long-lasting
people
should prefer a
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friends
a friend
friends
with same
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the same
opinions
if they want to make real friends
to
whom they trust and feel Change preposition
with
confortable
to Correct your spelling
comfortable
share
their feelings
. some people
who have different opinions
are mostly found unhappy with each other. Take an example if one person plan
a trip Change the verb form
plans
to
somewhere and wants that he would like to go there and Change preposition
apply
finally
when he discuss
with his Change the form of the verb
discussed
friend
about trip
plan and in response he got Add an article
the trip
refusal
from his Add an article
a refusal
friend
his heart will broke
and he never Change the verb form
break
share
his feelings
again with friend
again. Add an article
a friend
These kind
of friendships do not take Change the determiner
This kind
These kinds
long
time to finish becauseChange the article
a long
,
its a human psychology that if he did not get what he wantRemove the comma
apply
Add the particle
to
convert
into Change the verb form
converts
a
Change the article
an
unforgetable
Correct your spelling
unforgettable
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