Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In recent years, most
of
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apply
the
young Correct article usage
apply
people
leaving their parents and send them separate from themselves. Many old people
have sent to health
care
facilities by their family instead
of looking over them byself
. Correct your spelling
myself
This
essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such
an
scheme of keeping old Change the article
a
people
in special care
homes
.
To begin
with the positives, a crucial advantage is that older
population has treated well in terms of medical Correct article usage
the older
care
and nutrition. Nursing institutions hire professional nurses who provide them
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the
proper
medication and their meals on time which is really helpful in staying healthy. Change preposition
with proper
This
helps old people
to reduce their illness and pain. However
, if they are living in families, some people
don't care
much about providing them
good nutrition. They serve them whatever they eat themselves Verify preposition usage
withthem
such
as Pizza, Burger or other junk food. Besides
the healthy environment, health
departments also
prevent them from harmful diseases. This
is how they take instant actions in case of emergency because nurses always wandering around them and they detect easily what is going on with person's
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a person's
health
. In this
way, they never left behind with any treatment they need urgently. Moreover
, above
points consider that old pupil get the best and healthy life in Correct article usage
the above
care
homes
.
Nevertheless
, separate care
accomodations
for retired Correct your spelling
accommodations
accommodation
people
also
bring some bad results. The most important one is that they feel alone and homesickness. Due to staying away from their families for long
time, Change the article
a long
grand parents
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grandparents
feels
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feel
lack
of love and Correct article usage
a lack
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togetherness
togtherness
they suppose to get by living in their Correct article usage
the togtherness
homes
. In hospital residencies, they cannot share their thoughts or feelings with anyone there because sometimes they feel insecure to share it
with strangers. Correct pronoun usage
them
This
leads to give
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giving
them
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the
feeling
of loneliness and away from home. Correct article usage
a feeling
Next
to it, depression is also
another problem arise
from living away from families. Correct pronoun usage
that arise
For example
, in Canada, due to busy
schedule of Add an article
a busy
the busy
adults
they put their parents in Add a comma
,adults
care
facilites
and can not make often visits. Correct your spelling
facilities
Afterthat
, elderly humans start feeling that they are not loved anymore and grow negative thoughts in their mind. One day, these thoughts Correct your spelling
After that
becomes
a compound as a form of depression and compel them to kill themselves as they feel that they have no meaning left to live. Change the verb form
become
This
situation also
brings some unbearable diseases i.e., mental disorders, brain tumor
and many more. Change the spelling
tumour
Above
lines tells that sending our grandparents Correct article usage
The above
in
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to
heath
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health
insitutions
is not a good thing.
To conclude, no doubt putting old individuals in Correct your spelling
institutions
health
care
homes
has number
of advantages as they gove proper nutrition and prevent them Change the article
a number
the number
form
diseases. Correct your spelling
from
Also
, it has some demerits because they feel they are separated from their loving world and this
creates some mental problems in their mind whch
brings harmful results.Correct your spelling
which
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