There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should: describe the event say why you think he/she would be interested suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/he.

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I’m so thrilled to mention that our favourite Disk Jockey - Marshmello is coming to Dubai

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month. The best part is that he will be performing for two consecutive days from 26-27th April. The venue is the cricket stadium and the event will start from 6:30 in the evening and will

last

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for three hours each day.

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there will be other performers as well, I suggest we go only around Marshmello’s slot, which is from 8:30 pm. I remember you mentioned once that you’re so keen to attend his show, but you never got the chance because of your studies. As now you’ve finished your degree, you can fulfill your dream. Keeping that in mind, I have already bought two tickets,

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there is no chance of cancelling the plan.

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, the stadium is

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to the metro station which will make our travelling quite easy.

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, you can come directly to my home, and we will go together from there. I can’t believe that our long-awaited moment is

finally

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about to come. See you soon! Regards, Maninder

Submitted by Maninder kaur on Wed Mar 10 2021

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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