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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job, on the other hand other people think that getting experiences and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#university #education #job #hand #people #experiences #skills
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People
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 have different views about whether higher
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 or
experience
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 is more important to find a good job. while there are some benefits to have
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experience
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the experience
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, I believe that
people
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 have a better chance
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of finding
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 a job with
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university
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a university
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education
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. On the
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 hand, we know a lot of
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successful
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 do not have a
university
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degree
. They start learning by
experience
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 from a young. By not attending
university
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 they can save a lot of their money and time which they can use to build up a solid background. For some
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this
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experinece
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experience
 is much more important.
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, imagine someone wants to be a
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chef
, it is much more likely for him/her to find a job if they have
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an experience
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experience
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 rather than a
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 degree.
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, some other jobs require deep technical knowledge which can only be acquired in academia. A good example would be a pilot or a computer engineer.
On the other hand
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, every aspect of our lives has been changed in the past few decades
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with
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advancements in technology.
people
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 are more connected around the world and the
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companies
 have to compete with each other
in
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 a global scale. In order for them to
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succeed
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 they are more
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willing
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 to higher
people
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 with at least a minimum level of
university
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education
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. And these
people
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 are usually
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 much more than the traditional "know-how" experts who lack a solid theoretical background. In my opinion,
university
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education
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 is undoubtedly more important than
experience
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for
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 finding a position. While
experience
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 could be taught in a
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relatively
 short period, it is quite difficult for someone to get a high
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digree
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degree
.
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, it is better to prioritize
education
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 over
experience
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. In conclusion,
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 I can understand why
people
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 might prefer to get some
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experience
 as soon as
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possible
 without
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wasting
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 time studying which is certainly beneficial in some jobs, I would argue that by getting a
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college
collage
 or
university
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digree
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degree
 they would have a much higher chance of getting hired nowadays.
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