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You have bought an airline ticket, but for some reason you will not be able to travel on the day scheduled. Write a letter to the airline company: Providing the details of your flight, Explaining the situation, reasons why you cannot travel, Saying what you expect the airline company does

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to inform you that I am going to postpone my travel which I had booked for May 05 from Dubai to Singapore. I purchased a ticket from your airline
of
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 non-stop flight number ABC230 for May 05 at 6 AM from Dubai to Singapore. I am unable to travel as per
booked
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the booked
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 schedule because my father
is
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was
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 admitted
in
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to
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 the hospital yesterday. He is a heart patient and yesterday he was facing
problem
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a problem
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 to take breath in
sufficient
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a sufficient
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 way. I have to give company to him and as per
doctor's
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the doctor's
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advice
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advice,
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 I must take care of him. It will take 4 to 5 days to discharge from the hospital.
Therefore
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, I decided to postpone my travel until my father's health is not being well. I booked two-way tickets because I had to plan
return
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my return
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 within 7 days after attending two meetings with the clients. As per my current
situation
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situation,
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 I would like to cancel my tickets. I
also
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 request
to
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apply
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you to refund my ticket price as per
airline's
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the airline's
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 rules and regulations. I will re-book my ticket
ones
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once
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 I will re-schedule my client's meetings. I would be grateful if you could settle my refund at your earliest. Yours sincerely, David Zane

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task response
Provide more details about the return flight and any relevant booking information to avoid ambiguity.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and supporting details to enhance coherence.
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