You have bought an airline ticket, but for some reason you will not be able to travel on the day scheduled. Write a letter to the airline company: Providing the details of your flight, Explaining the situation, reasons why you cannot travel, Saying what you expect the airline company does

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to inform you that I am going to postpone my travel which I had booked for May 05 from Dubai to Singapore. I purchased a ticket from your airline

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non-stop flight number ABC230 for May 05 at 6 AM from Dubai to Singapore. I am unable to travel as per

booked

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the booked

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schedule because my father

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admitted

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the hospital yesterday. He is a heart patient and yesterday he was facing

problem

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to take breath in

sufficient

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way. I have to give company to him and as per

doctor's

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the doctor's

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advice

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I must take care of him. It will take 4 to 5 days to discharge from the hospital.

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, I decided to postpone my travel until my father's health is not being well. I booked two-way tickets because I had to plan

return

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my return

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within 7 days after attending two meetings with the clients. As per my current

situation

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I would like to cancel my tickets. I

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request

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you to refund my ticket price as per

airline's

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the airline's

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rules and regulations. I will re-book my ticket

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I will re-schedule my client's meetings. I would be grateful if you could settle my refund at your earliest. Yours sincerely, David Zane

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task response

Provide more details about the return flight and any relevant booking information to avoid ambiguity.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and supporting details to enhance coherence.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

208 words

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