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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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A significant
amount
 of
waste
materials
 and garbages are getting produced by most
people
 in the modern era.In my ,opinion the fundamental reason for
this
 issue is the lack of knowledge and common sense among the citizens of our country.
Firstly
, the absence of proper knowledge towards using the material which is not decomposable is the prior reason for rubbish increment in recent days.Not taking attention to the impact of
waste
materials
 on the communities and not using the proper guidelines to dump the
waste
products
 is the effect of a large
amount
 of garbage. Another point to consider is industrialization.From the
last
 recent ,years the development of the country involving new technologies has been extraordinary
however
this
 rapid infrastructure process
also
 bringing an abundance
amount
 of
waste
 and unusable
products
 day by day which
consequently
 impacting our environment and having a detrimental effect on
people
 health and social life.On the other ,hand the lack of resources and proper guidelines are missing to influence
people
 to limit the use of
materials
 that are not reusable. Regards to the government's steps and involvement to mitigate
this
 problem are significantly crucial.The government should ban all the bags
materials
for instance
 Plastic which can not be used again and
instead
 influence and aware societies to use bags made of paper and other usable
products
.They should
also
 start a campaign to make the citizen of the country aware of their responsibility as a role model to others. In conclusion, the important reasons for producing
waste
products
 are
people
 awareness,carelessness and the rapid development of new factories and industrial areas.The government should come up with a significant
amount
 of solutions like banning plastic bags and starting a movement to eradicate
this
 problem which in the end having a negative impact on our daily health and overall environment.
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