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Some systems require students to specialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of these two education systems and which is better?

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It is no secret that education is a very essential part of life.
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, there are differing opinions regarding school education. While some agree that
students
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 should specialize in certain
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 since the age of fifteen, others think that
students
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 should
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 a wide range of
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 until the end of school.
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 essay showcases the positives of both systems and presents the writer's personal opinion. Regarding the
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system
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, which requires
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 to be focused
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 certain
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, it has the advantage of helping
students
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 explore deeper in their preferred subject.
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study
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 the
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 they are the most passionate about extensively and in
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 can master
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subjects
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 before applying to college.
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, there are
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 that are good in a certain range of subject and at the same time have weaknesses in other
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, by allowing
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, they are not distracted by studying other
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On the other hand
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, the
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 that demands
students
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 to
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 a variety of
subjects
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 has its own benefits as well. In
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system
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,
students
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 can learn various
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 of
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, and in
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 gives student
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 of each field.
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, by mastering many
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,
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the student
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 can have more choices in applying to college and pursuing their future career. Personally, I do think that the
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system
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 is better. In my opinion,
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the student
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 should be able to choose their
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 of interest in
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 by high school or age fifteen. That way, they can learn about the
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 they liked the most.
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, that can
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 certain
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 and have a certain, defined choice of future studies and jobs.
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