It is true that whilst many people use their public parks, this space could be used for other purposes, such as building houses for young people or developing a business area to create jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the space of public parks can be used for building.
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. I think that it will be worth
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public park
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as for many people's life. Making
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space is important for citizen's life. If there are only building or house in my city, I can not enjoy walking and refresh time.
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, New-York city is one of the top-rated city due to Central Park. Many people can enjoy their life in
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