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Despite A Variety Of Sport Facilities And Gyms, People Are Less Fit Nowadays Than Ever Before. What Do You You Think Are The Main Causes Of This Problem? What Solutions Can You Suggest?

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It is true that there are fewer
people
 today who exercises or go to the gym regularly and that results in them being unfit. There are various reasons for
this
 problem but some steps can be taken to overcome it.
Firstly
,
people
 nowadays have sedentary jobs, which means almost 3/4th of their day goes in sitting in front of the computer at
one
 place and working.
Secondly
, spending a lot of time in front of a computer and the internet has made
people
 more lazy and addictive to the internet.
World
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 wide web constitutes
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the
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distraction technology as well. Human beings prefer spending
one
 hour on the net
instead
 of spending time in fitness training for the well being of their body. In
such
 scenarios,
one
 great solution could be starting their fitness journey online. There are many apps or youtube for that instance
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 offer free knowledge as to how
one
 should exercise. These
trainings
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training
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 are for all kind of
people
; if somebody is starting out as a beginner or someone who is at the advanced level, the internet has it all. These applications are AI sound so it schedules the routine according to
one
's BMI (body mass index). In conclusion, some reasons why
people
 are not working out can be identified, but some solution can be applied to encourage them more concerned about their physical health.
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