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Living in a country where you gave to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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This
 bar chart illustrates information about the numbers of British inhabitants between 18 and 65 above, providing fundings in the year 1990 and 2010. From the
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 it can be seen that the charity rate experienced an upward trend in the younger and
middle aged
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 group in the
first
 year.
However
,
this
 declined in
the
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elderly people.
Moreover
, there was some fluctuation in the
second
 period. In 1990, approximately 17% accounted for the
age
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 18-25.
This
 rose steadily to just over 30% in 26-35 and reached a peak of merely 42% in 36-50, with the highest amount of collected money that year. From here, it dropped sharply to 35% and
finally
 dipped down with 2,5% in the
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 65 and above.
By contrast
, in 2010 the numbers were 10 % lower than in the
first
 figure but showed a gradual jump to just about 24% in 26-35. There was a steady upward trend in the age group 36 -50, which accounted for 35%. The figure peaked at nearly 40% in 51-65 and became the largest segment in 2010.
Subsequently
, the charity became less popular in elderly citizen and plunged to 35%.
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