Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Majority of the population look for information and broadcast online on net, due to increased digitization and advancement in electronic
media
. It has been a point of argument that
news papers
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will still remain
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source of
news
and information. I do not agree with
this
, In my opinion, reading
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is more of a habit and slowly and steadily people are moving towards online
media
. There are numerous benefits of reading
news
online on
internet
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the internet
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,
first
of them being easy
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and accessibility. People can read
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whenever and where they are and at there comfort.
Also
finding or searching any
news
is much easier using search options,
however
in newspapers shuffling pages becomes uncomfortable.
Secondly
, Being digitised, online
news
is updated the moment
news
is generated or quite frequently,
where as
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most of the
print
media
is updated once every 24hrs.
Thirdly
digital
news
are
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almost free or at a very minimal cost
where as
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newspaper comes at monthly subscription which makes
print
media
a lot costly
then
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online
news
.
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online
media
is environment friendly whereas newspapers
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lot
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of paper, printing ink and
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of resources that
makes
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print
media
expensive and not eco friendly. In conclusion, Considering
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of online
media
over
print
media
,
habits
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of people are changing and more and more population will be opting to
web
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for
news
and
print
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might get obsolete in
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time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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