Many scientific institutes conduct research on live animals. Some people regard it as cruel and unnecessary while others believe it is justified in the interest of human welfare. Discuss the two views and give your reasons. Give reason for your answer.

A lot of scientific institutions perform experiments on live

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. Some individuals view

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action as barbaric and needless, while others

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are of the opinion that

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action is justifiable as it is in the best interest of human well-being. In

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essay, I would discuss both sides and give my opinion. These days, due to

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, there has been advancements in scientific researches and

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action has made the use of

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for experimental purposes necessary because

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most

animals

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are closely related to

humans

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in terms of characteristics and physiology. As

people

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are constantly changing especially in their ideas, some

people

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believe that using

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for experimentation is cruel and needless. I think they have many reasons for their beliefs like; considering animal rights because, most of these

animals

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experience

toture

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while waiting to be used for research, being conservationists because most of

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die quickly due to the terrible conditions they are put in and

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in turn

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increases the demand for another set of

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, if

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continues to happen, extinction might occur and

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could disadvantageous to

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because

animals

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make up the food chain and ecosystem.

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, some

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believe using

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for research is justifiable and that’s it contributes positively to the interests of human beings. In honesty, advancement in various kinds of treatments and ailment have come

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far because of the sacrifice of

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for

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example, rats have been used to test various diseases, their response to drugs and vaccines before they are implemented for human testing.

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has reduced

mortality

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rates of

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by a major margin,

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,

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have

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view because using

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has always been beneficial for the well-being of

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. In my

opinion

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I think that

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both views make great points,

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, I think balance should be the appropriate approach for

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concern.

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of both views would not be beneficial to the wellness of

humans

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.

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laws should

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by

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to protect the interests of these poor

animals

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and

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minimize the amounts of

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used for research.

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create external bodies to supervise the use of these

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and

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create plans for conservation and preservation of

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this animal

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so that our healthy ecosystem is assured . In conclusion,

animals

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have to be recognized as mortal entities and as so be treated with respect even tho they are seemingly lower than

humans

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because we need them to ensure our ecosystem is healthy and

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discover new treatments for aliments and understanding how various organs in the body function which is very necessary for healthcare improvements .