Many scientific institutes conduct research on live animals. Some people regard it as cruel and unnecessary while others believe it is justified in the interest of human welfare. Discuss the two views and give your reasons. Give reason for your answer.

A lot of scientific institutions perform experiments on live

animals

. Some individuals view

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action as barbaric and needless, while others

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are of the opinion that

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action is justifiable as it is in the best interest of human well-being. In

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essay, I would discuss both sides and give my opinion. These days, due to

the worlds evolution

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, there has been advancements in scientific researches and

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action has made the use of

animals

for experimental purposes necessary because

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most

animals

are closely related to

humans

in terms of characteristics and physiology. As

people

are constantly changing especially in their ideas, some

people

believe that using

animals

for experimentation is cruel and needless. I think they have many reasons for their beliefs like; considering animal rights because, most of these

animals

experience

toture

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torture

while waiting to be used for research, being conservationists because most of

these animal

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this animal

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die quickly due to the terrible conditions they are put in and

this

in turn

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increases the demand for another set of

animals

, if

this

continues to happen, extinction might occur and

this

could disadvantageous to

humans

because

animals

make up the food chain and ecosystem.

On the other hand

, some

people

believe using

animals

for research is justifiable and that’s it contributes positively to the interests of human beings. In honesty, advancement in various kinds of treatments and ailment have come

thus

far because of the sacrifice of

animals

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example, rats have been used to test various diseases, their response to drugs and vaccines before they are implemented for human testing.

This

has reduced

mortality

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rates of

humans

by a major margin,

hence

,

people

have

this

view because using

animals

has always been beneficial for the well-being of

humans

. In my

opinion

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I think that

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both views make great points,

therefore

, I think balance should be the appropriate approach for

this

concern.

As extremes

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of both views would not be beneficial to the wellness of

humans

.

Therefore

laws should

enforced

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by

government

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to protect the interests of these poor

animals

and

also

minimize the amounts of

animals

used for research.

Furthermore

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create external bodies to supervise the use of these

animals

and

also

create plans for conservation and preservation of

these animal

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this animal

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so that our healthy ecosystem is assured . In conclusion,

animals

have to be recognized as mortal entities and as so be treated with respect even tho they are seemingly lower than

humans

because we need them to ensure our ecosystem is healthy and

also

discover new treatments for aliments and understanding how various organs in the body function which is very necessary for healthcare improvements .