Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

International

tourism

make

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people

travell

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travel

around the world safely, and the business makes

profit

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from

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tourists.

However

, there are some drawbacks of international

tourism

that affect international relationships in terms of lack of intercultural communication skills and respecting local cultures and custom. As a tendency,

people

who adept at foreign languages avoid tapping into

agents

of

tourism

. These

peole

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people

are usually familiar

to

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the target language's culture and history

at

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some extent

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because language skills and cultural

knoweldge

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knowledge

are closely connected at higher levels. The thing is that many

people

who don't have any knowledge

on

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foreing

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foreign

countries

find international

tourism

agents

very useful. The

agents

save the travellers a lot of time cumbersome registration and paperwork on foreign languages. If

the

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international

tourism

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unavailable to those

people

, the economic impact will be huge in many

countries

. Some

countries

hinge on

the

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tourism

, especially developing

countries

. The restriction of international

tourism

will prevent foreigners from visiting these developing

countires

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countries

.

This

would cause international political tension.

Although

most

internationl

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international

travellers are keen to see local unique

archtecture

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architecture

and nature, they tend to fail to act locally.

For example

, in Japan,

people

are reluctant to eat and drink while walking on the street. In the US,

on the other hand

, most

people

are willing to grab food and drink to eat on the streets. Of course, it is not

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issue of right or wrong. It is a matter of how you can respect local culture and custom when they travel to foreign

countries

. Based on

this

assumption, it would be necessary for international

tourism

that they should give

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guidance on the culture of the destination. To sum up, there is a fact that international

tourism

helps to boost

economy

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.

However

, the

agents

need to give

a

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proper guidance of the destination so that the tourists can follow the local rules and customs. I believe that the risk of increasing political tension can be prevented.