You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words

Good Parenting is
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now a days
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looking at the children and their behaviour. According to some, parenting should include
as
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apply

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a subject in
the
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schools
.
Teching
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or guiding the children about parenting is one thing but at what
age
? and does
the
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schools
are
the
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good option for that ? I partially agree with
this
opinion. In
this
essay, I am going to present my opinion. According to
me
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, to understand parenting, children when they are young needs to know who are the
parents
first
, why are they called
as
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Mom and Dad? what is the relation they need to understand
.
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But at
this
age
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they are unable to get these questions as they see the same faces
everyday
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and from
that
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they imagine or build
the
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relation with them. As and when they grow up , they see their
parents
,
grand
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grandparents

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parents
and enough to understand when they are going to start their own family. Sometimes
this
experience is not good that impacts
worst
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on a child's mind.
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. in
US
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we see there are 3 divorces
gets
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filed against 5 where a child has to choose only one
parent
either a Mom or a Dad which is not good, both are equally important for a child and his growth. Another point is if we start teaching parenting in
schools
at
their
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early
age
when
this
is the
age
to play, to draw, to read, to write but
definately
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definitely

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not to understand parenting. So we should include Parenting not as a subject in the school but as a kind of project or some seminar or a
fun filled
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act for ages above 10 years so that they can take
this
as a positive wave and it will help them to be a good
parent
when they soon become Mom and Dad. By
birth
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a
perosn
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person

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does not know the skills of a good
parent
. But
experience
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the experience

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in life teaches him to be good or bad. But
schools
has
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that
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power to mould
such
chidren
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children

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and show them to walk on the good path. The bonding of
parents
, love, care about everyone will be the best example in
this
case which they follow and they will become a good
parent
.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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