what are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your couuntry to live or study abroad?

There are many advantages and disadvantage of leaving one's
country
to abroad to attain
further
study or live there. Having independence is the primary advantage and the feeling of homesick is the main drawbacks. On the one hand,
individuals
learn to become independent by moving to
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nation.
This
is to say that
individuals
will have to live alone from family and friends.
Moreover
, they will have to manage their own finance by finding a job and will have to
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their own decisions.
For instance
, most of the
individuals
in Nepal live with
ther
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their
the
her
family and are heavily dependent on their parents but when they move to another
country
especially to study, they will have to learn to live alone and manage their
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activities by
themelves
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themselves
such
as preparing their own food and finding a job to support themselves.
On the other hand
,
feeling
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of homesick is the drawback of moving to
foreign
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country
.
This
is mainly because those students
those
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pursuing their studies abroad are mostly the students who just finished their high school or undergraduate and have never left home their home and
country
. Leaving
home
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of
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caring parents and friends are quite stressful and they will miss these things as they will be living in a new place with no known people and
this
can cause the
individuals
to suffer from isolation.
For instance
, a recent study by
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Cambridge University found that 70% of the
foreigh
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foreign
students suffer from depression caused by isolation and homesickness. In conclusion, the advantage of living or studying in a
foreigh
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foreign
land is learning
of
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independence and the downfall of
this
is the feeling of homesick leading to
poor
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mental health of those people.
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