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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #health #future
Indeed,
health
 is wealth. Only to be discovered
in
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later
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 age that
health
 is a top priority. It is true that
peole's
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people's
health
are
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 deteriorating compared to previous decades. Most
people
 face more
health
 issues due to their fast and instant
lifestyle
, as well as the
way
 they work. It is doomed in the future that
health
 issues might rise up due to the
peoplr's
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people's
 current routine. Everything is fast and instant, from using mobile phones all the
way
 to consume too
much processed
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 food.
Such
lifestyle
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 contributes to poor
health
 later on in life. The use of handphone in the
last
 few decades has made
people
 opt for
less
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 active
lifestyle
.
Hence
, there is hardly any physical activities in their daily routine. There are more statistics on various diseases all over the globe and one of its sources is mainly from consuming too
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 food. Fast food is a favourite
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 many. The very reason that those who consume it will regret it later on. The
way
people
 work right now has a major impact on their
health
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 the future. Most
people
 nowadays work in offices, from 9am to 5 pm, or even longer than that. Without a doubt, the body posture, lack of
sleepand
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sleep and
 certainly the focus to get things done contributes to putting
health
 in priority number two. A normal worker usually gets
ohome
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home
 on time.
However
, on the days where the dateline is near, more working hours are required and over the years, it has
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 the quality of
health
 in general.to conclude, with the
way
 that most
people
 are living right now, undoubtedly,
health
 will be affected in a negative
way
. Generally, statistics in most countries indicate that more and more
people
 are no longer as healthy compared o the older generation.
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lifestyle
 can not be changed overnight.
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, to have
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better
health
, small and continuous change is vital in one's life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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