Men and women employed in full-time jobs should share the responsibilities of household chores. Do you agree or disagree? Share relevant personal experiences.

In the modern world,
both
the
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men and
the
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women
have similar responsibilities to take
care
of
the
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household duties. Even though the old generation believe that
women
have the whole authority of household chores, the new generation
think
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the exact opposite. I agree with the statement that
both
have to share the domestic jobs equally.
To begin
with,
firstly
, cooking is a basic need for any family which needs to be taken
care
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atleast
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thrice a day.
Usually
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it is done by the ladies in the family when they do not have to do a fulltime job whereas, men have to find a job outside to take
care
of the family.
However
, the situation has changed and recently
both
the men and the
women
started earning for the family which means
both
of them
have
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to get involved in kitchen works.
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, when
me
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and my wife were working, we had to cook food
on
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every weekend and had to keep it in the refrigerator to save it for the whole
next
week.
Thus
, proper
mangement
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management

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had to be implemented in things which we considered as small jobs.
Secondly
, almost all families have
atleast
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one child to be taken
care
of and
that is
the situation where everyone
strugles
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in their life.
This
need to be handled properly where
both
the parents have equal responsibility on upbringing a bright child for
the
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society.
Therefore
, couples having
new born
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babies as well as young children often have to work
accordingly
so that one of the
parent
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could stay at home to feed and play with the child.
For instance
, a friend of mine in Canada
were
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blessed with a baby girl after their marriage for whom they had to plan their shifts of work
accordingly
.
Therefore
, in modern times, there is no fixed work in regard to
the
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sex as
both
have to find the balance between each other to manage things. To conclude, in my opinion, I agree with the statement and have to discard the orthodox ideology where
women
are only allowed to do household chores.
Therefore
, I recommend the future generation to have enough common sense
on
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how the domestic duties to be shared
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