Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people argued that governments are responsible for
unhealthy
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the unhealthy
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environment while
other
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others
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believe that
this
is not
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only responsibility of some political organisations and
this
hurdle can be denied by
efforts
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the efforts
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of every individual.
Firstly
,
a
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authority can make
a
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some legal bills for reducing
of
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atmosphere problems but it can be followed by only citizens
,
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if people
are not agree
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to accept
that
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rules than it is impossible to overcome
from
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this
issue.
Therefore
,
small
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the small
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effort of every individual can make a huge change in society.
For example
, in 2015 in India, a prime minister
start
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a campaign with
title
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the title
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of
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" clean India- healthy India" but it failed because no one
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give
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a response to
this
campaign.
Thus
, it is
must
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for every
person
to be a part of
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the campaign
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so they can decrease
this
problem.
Secondly
, it is impossible for
single
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a single
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person
to drop
this
hurdle because it is too
hoge
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huge
and it
need
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needs
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efforts from everybody. For
exmaple
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example
, if one
person
try
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to
make
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take
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some actions to reduce pollution but
another
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millions of people are increasing that problem
than
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then
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how can that individual will get some positive results. So,
government
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the government
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has to make some rules and take some legal actions for
this
issue. In a conclusion, governments are not only a
care taker
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caretaker
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of these problems because they
can not do nothing
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can not do anything
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without their citizens.
Although
,it not
a
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possible
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for one
person
to overcome
this
problem, its a hand in hand participation. Both parties have to contribute together to get some good results.
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