Today every large city facing traffic jam problem. what are the causes and how can it tackle

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Traffic congestion in many
cities
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around the world is severely increasing nowadays. Traffic congestion is the results of
cities
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having more drivers than in the past with outdated maintenance, planning and infrastructure
that is
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not able to handle the needs of the public roads.
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cause of problems can be solved by
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the government
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.
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essay will discuss various causes and solutions
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this
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these
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problems.
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with, there are multifarious causes of
taffic
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traffic
jam in
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apply
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large
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.
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, the road in
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most
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not engineered for today's traffic densities. They have
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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