Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, a number of

students

are working while studying.

Although

this

tendency may lead to negative results, the number of young people who sacrifice

education

for

work

is growing.

This

essay

will discuss some causes why

students

work

resulting

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poor quality of and increased pressures.

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this

essay

will discuss the

solutions

to these problems including gov’t subsidy and online learning. It is apparent that most of the

students

who

work

have many financial expenses to meet. One common cause is

high

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cost of

education

. Many colleges and universities have high tuition fees, some families cannot fully afford

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higher

education

for their children.

Consequently

, these

students

have to

work

to pay university and college fees. Another problem is the accommodation and other allowances. A number

students

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study away from their hometown

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and have to pay for their accommodations, foods, entertainments etc. As it is often hard to cover these expenses, they don’t have

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than to

work

to cover their financial expenses. Indeed, there are some

students

working in burger machines or in restaurants for extra income to help augment their financial obligation,

however

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this

is taking a toll on their studies resulting

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lower grades and stress. Overall, the financial aspect of

education

as well as the lack of quality time

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are major concerns of some

students

There are some possible ways to address these problems.

Firstly

, the government could make higher

education

free by subsidizing tertiary

education

. They can

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some amount from the country’s budget

in addition

to the

education

budget.

Also

, they can tap financial institutions, private and public to have windows for college loans accessible to all

students

w/ very low interest and payable to a certain period. Another

solutions

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to offer online

education

funded by government or private institutions with

minimal

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fee.

This

will lessen the financial burden of the parents as well as the

students

. Overall, with some of the

solutions

stated above,

students

would be able to continue their studies without the burden of

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aspect,

also

this

will encourage young people to

enroll

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for tertiary schooling most especially to under privilege people. In conclusion, more and more

students

are working causing a toll and stress on their

education

.

This

essay

discussed the high cost of

education

as well as financial obligations as the causes why

students

need to

work

compromising their study .

Also

,

this

essay

discussed the suggested

solutions

of

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these problems that would help the

students

such

as government subsidy, provision for

educational

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loan as well as

opening

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the opening

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of online courses.