With the development of technology and science, some people believe that there is no great value of artists such as musicians and painters. What are the things artists can do but the scientist cannot? Should art be encouraged more?

In the era of the digital world, some
people
more appreciate scientific and technological achievements than
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arts. Because of
this
, some creative professions are losing their prestige. In
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essay, I would like to identify the reasons for
this
phenomenon and ways of changing it. As the expression of human creativity, artists create unique works which are based on their thoughts, experiences and emotions.
In addition
,
this
activity might be motivating and awakening to
life
, helping to survive difficult
life
situations. Despite
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applications of artificial intellect, which output depends on
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. It means that these apps just combine data, but do not call to existence new things. As an example,
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painter Frida had
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broken spite and hard pain every day. But she started to paint her own portraits at nights and found a meaning of
life
in that. She became a famous artist and her
life
and works inspired many
people
because her painting conveys lively, sincere feelings. It is important to maintain artists and art in general. As it showed in the example before,
people
might find motivations and the feeling of togetherness with other
people
because as
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human being we are still driven by our feelings
first
than rapid computations or the latest scientific researches. A piece of
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device can not be inspiring and uplifting but arts in its almost countless forms might.
Thus
, we need to encourage art more on different levels including teaching in schools, grants for young artists, exhibitions and so so on. In conclusion, we may say that the value of dancers, writers, musicians, painters and other creative professions will never decrease.
Moreover
, technological developments will not be able to replace living emotions that are embedded in art.
Submitted by ekaterina.kosheleva.2016 on

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