Traffic is a problem everywhere in the world. It creates congestion, and noise. In response to this problem, some cities charge an expensive tax to cars in downtown areas. Do you agree with this tax?

Traffic congestion and noise pollution have become a global

problem

therefore

, in response to

this

issue, the government has increased the

tax

on vehicles

in

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an aim to address the

problem

. I strongly disagree with

this

point of view as I believe that these concerns can be resolved differently without making unnecessary demands of the public.

Firstly

, globalization has negatively created issues like overpopulation.

Therefore

, traffic congestion and noise pollution are the by-

prouducts

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products

of

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this

problem

. As

people

are constantly migrating from one place to another due to diverse reasons like; better amenities, employments and healthcare purposes.

However

,

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of

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private car owners heavily

have

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some negative sides

for

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the individual and

the

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society.

For instance

, many

people

live in

areas

which

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that

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are not covered by public transportation,

such

as those who lived in rural

areas

or

countryside

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the countryside

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. Should there be any public buses or trains that pass through

that

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those

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areas

, the schedule might be only once or twice

in

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a day. These

people

need private cars and if the

tax

for motorised vehicles is raised significantly

then

it would be a big burden and

problem

for them. 

Furthermore

, it is a fact that

automotive

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industries have absorbed so many employments. As the demand for motor vehicle decreases due to the high

tax

rate, many automobile companies would reduce their employment number. As a consequence, the country's unemployment rate would be high. In conclusion, the solution of charging private car owner with

high

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vehicle

tax

rate to reduce traffic problems has significant drawbacks. In my opinion,

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of the solution are that

people

could travel faster and air pollution would be reduced.

However

, the disadvantages of it are that it would become a big

problem

for those who lived in remote

areas

since public transports are rarely reaching them and

also

cause unemployment issue.