Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children.) Do you agree or disagree?
Many believe that high school
students
should do unpaid Use synonyms
community
Use synonyms
work
as part of the education program Use synonyms
such
as helping Linking Words
kindergarden
teachers Correct your spelling
kindergarten
to
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in
from
looking
after children, developing their neighbourhood and Change the verb form
look
community
. To my way of thinking, it is a good Use synonyms
oportunitie
to improve their personality.
I believe that high school Correct your spelling
opportunity
students
can have a Use synonyms
valueable
Correct your spelling
valuable
experience
from unpaid Use synonyms
sochial
Correct your spelling
social
work
. They can increase their Use synonyms
real life
Add a hyphen
real-life
experience
which is Use synonyms
extreamely
important in their age. Correct your spelling
extremely
For
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example
my sister needed to do 60 hours Add a comma
,example
unpaid
Change preposition
of unpaid
work
for the Use synonyms
community
because it was mandatory for her. Even though she did not Use synonyms
wanted
to go, she loved it. She was lucky enough to Change the verb form
want
chose
. She loves kids so she decided to Change the verb
choose
work
in a local Use synonyms
kindergarden
. Correct your spelling
kindergarten
This
Linking Words
experience
inspired her to became a special needs teacher.
At the same Use synonyms
time
the Add a comma
,time
community
has a benefit from it Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
ealdery
people or people with disability. Correct your spelling
elderly
Students
can give a hand around the house Use synonyms
for example
cleaning the gutter or even cocking some food together. These activities help elderly people to forget Linking Words
that
fact they are alone and Correct determiner usage
the
also
a big help to get these thing done around the house what they are would not Linking Words
been
able to complete be Change the verb form
be
themselfs
. Correct your spelling
themselves
Moreover
social Linking Words
work
improving our Use synonyms
community
.
In conclusion, If I am the Use synonyms
decision maker
I would make it mandatory for high school Add a hyphen
decision-maker
students
to do unpaid Use synonyms
community
Use synonyms
work
because it is Use synonyms
a
ordinary chance for Change the article
an
yungsters
to get Correct your spelling
youngsters
real life
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real-life
experience
which makes their life easier in the future and Use synonyms
also
these Linking Words
program
create a better Change the determiner
programs
community
.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite