Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent, do you agree or disagree ?

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of the

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is a solid responsibility of authorities and

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they think that the effectiveness of personal actions is limited and

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can not change any problem

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related to the

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.

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essay will be a strong advocate of

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activities that have the potential to be more effective with their viable precautions.

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with, there is no doubt that

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have many opportunities that can be used

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reduce

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environmental pollution.

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, they are able to impose

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system

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chemical companies. By doing

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, the carbon footprint of factories can be reduced and doubtlessly,

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will affect

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environment

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in

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positive way than societies can.

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, deforestation and industrial

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logging

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accelerated

like never before. The only force that can stop

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activity is

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and politicians. It can be seen clearly,

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many environmental activists' relentless work, they have been suffering from lack of funding and the force that

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able to prevent the damage like law enforcement.

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,

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can be encouraged to being more sensitive to environmental issues by using social campaign and maybe tax discounts can be a viable solution in order to stop environmental harassment.

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,

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also

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strong control

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public behaviour which is one of the

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to protect

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environment

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the environment

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in order to support recycling and every time

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put a plastic bottle into the machine, they can earn a quarter. For

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reason,

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are more willing to recycle their product.

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, to conserve

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and to solve the problems about it, social awareness should be raised. In

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way,

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can be more effective than individuals activities. To conclude, politicians and

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can be more beneficial to

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when compared to activities that have been done by

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.

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with the suggestion and it

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that authorities can solve the major problems about

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,

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as carbon emission and industrial logging. As a

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argument that

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been given is

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awareness can be increased with

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campaign and tax discount.