Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent, do you agree or disagree ?

Many individuals think that

protection

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of the

environment

is a solid responsibility of authorities and

governments

.

Also

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they think that the effectiveness of personal actions is limited and

this

can not change any problem

that is

related to the

environment

.

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essay will be a strong advocate of

governments

activities that have the potential to be more effective with their viable precautions.

To begin

with, there is no doubt that

governments

have many opportunities that can be used

for

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reduce

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reducing

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environmental pollution.

For example

, they are able to impose

filtration

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a filtration

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system

to

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chemical companies. By doing

this

, the carbon footprint of factories can be reduced and doubtlessly,

this

will affect

environment

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the environment

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in

more

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positive way than societies can.

Furthermore

, deforestation and industrial

loggin

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logging

are

accelarated

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accelerated

like never before. The only force that can stop

this

activity is

governments

and politicians. It can be seen clearly,

however

many environmental activists' relentless work, they have been suffering from lack of funding and the force that

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able to prevent the damage like law enforcement.

Moreover

,

people

can be encouraged to being more sensitive to environmental issues by using social campaign and maybe tax discounts can be a viable solution in order to stop environmental harassment.

Therefore

,

governments

also

have

a

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strong control

on

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the

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public behaviour which is one of the

key

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to protect

environment

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the environment

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.

For instance

, Germany

provide

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an

automate

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in order to support recycling and every time

people

put a plastic bottle into the machine, they can earn a quarter. For

this

reason,

people

are more willing to recycle their product.

Consequently

, to conserve

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and to solve the problems about it, social awareness should be raised. In

this

way,

governments

can be more effective than individuals activities. To conclude, politicians and

governments

can be more beneficial to

environment

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when compared to activities that have been done by

people

.

This

essay

is strongly agree

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with the suggestion and it

demonstrate

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that authorities can solve the major problems about

environment

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the environment

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,

such

as carbon emission and industrial logging. As a

second

argument that

have

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been given is

society

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awareness can be increased with

social

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the social

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campaign and tax discount.