in the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing what problems will this cause for individuals and society? suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations

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in the contemporary
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, life
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expectancy
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society and
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individuals as well. in
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am planning to find out the complications, which is bound up with
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suppose that high life expectancy can be the cause of two main
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it is
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meal. plenty of
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is dying as they cannot afford
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adequate
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total number of
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cannot buy even bread.
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of all it is an over-
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populated
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witness a high chance of glaciers become fully melted and it will entail horrible climate changes around the
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vehicles in numbers can reinforce
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global warming as more cars will emit harmful fumes. we can try to avoid it if we have a desire to do it.
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assume that
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can spend money on preventing the
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they can invest
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different types of
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funds, which try to save the environment and help the
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, who have
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with getting some food.
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they should not forget about making investments
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education.
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education can provide the skills, which come in
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handy
when we try to save our
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government
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can
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expand
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number
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of places in universities and convince children to take agriculture courses, which teach them how to work with
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the soil
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to increase
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income of food.
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government
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can get rid of two
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at the same time in conclusion,
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would like to state that not only
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play
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preventing these
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but
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people
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. we can defeat
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@enemy@ only if combine efforts
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average life expectancy
  • developed world
  • increase
  • individuals
  • society
  • personal goals
  • ambitions
  • quality of life
  • leisure
  • recreation
  • healthcare costs
  • challenges
  • healthcare system
  • ageing population
  • shortage
  • available workers
  • economy
  • retirement planning
  • healthy lifestyles
  • investing
  • social support systems
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