it is more important for governments to spend public funds on promoting a healthy lifestyle than treatment.

It is often argued that the government should allocate more

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to the promotion of following a healthy lifestyle rather than treatment. As a matter of fact, I think both these two should deserve having equal funds. Allocating public funds toward improving the health state of people would help the human to increase its body resistance to a vast number of

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is because some people are more likely to follow bad habits that negatively affect their health and make them more vulnerable to serious diseases. A typical example of

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is that some of them get addicted to chemicals, fast food, and other unhealthy incentives. For that reason, the public authority could use that

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to build more places where they encourage people to get rid of their addiction

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as sports facilities, and rehabilitation

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.

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, spending more

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on constructing hospitals, modernizing medical devices and developing new treatments would contribute significantly to save millions of patients. If there were no financial aids for experimenting

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medicines, contagious and

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diseases,

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as Ebola and Malaria would wipe out half of the

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humanity

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is proved the importance of inventing

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cure for those who are hoping to find something that can heal their sickness and

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only is achievable by

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giving the medical researchers and

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all the resources they need to tackle these deadly diseases. To sum up, providing financial support

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medical treatments is less no important and

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than spending

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on advertising for a healthy lifestyle.