More and more people buy a range of household goods such as television, microwave, oven ,.. Do you think it positive or negative development?

It is an undeniable fact that humankind is updating day by day

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the improvement of new technology. Numerous individuals these days are bringing items like computers and LED screens to their

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. I strongly believe that there are many cons like pollution and health issues by installing all

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equipments

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equipment

in the houses.

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with, utilising a product like a microwave oven is harmful because, if the food like pizza is cooked in it will lose all the nutrients available in it and leads to health disorders,

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different healthy options, it is advisable to use natural products like a copper vessel which protects the snack items to maintain its mineral levels. Another situation is that if mankind is using heating items to cook stored foods they will become obese,

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buying

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will have more issues.

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, these days both adults and children are using smartphones and laptops for their education and work.

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are avoiding using textbooks and

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instead

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they are studying through ebooks,

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notes requires electronic tablets,

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this products

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by both parents and pupils will

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physical problems.

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, buying a television for the household for watching has become an addiction to kids,

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it is suggested for children to improve their knowledge by going to school.

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, most of the population these days are willing to make their living area to be filled with electronic goods which are causing problems to their bodies,

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there are more negative impacts rather than having advantages by buying

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range of systems.