Government should spend money on railway rather than roads? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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expenditure is an issue of concern in many countries. It is even wiser for

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goverment

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government

to decide on the best mode of

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transport

to spend money on. It is agreed that governments should spend money on

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rather than roads. The main two reasons being that , trains reduce

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congestion

and because of their great speed.

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, a train has

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capacity to carry a

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of

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in a go.

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, when

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are going to work in the

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, where I come from , they will go by train

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of public transport.

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will

therefore

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limit the

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of vehicles heading to the

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thus

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reducing traffic jam

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rush hours. It is better to

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prioritise

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as

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will combat the issue of traffic jam which is so rampant in many cities nowadays.

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,

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transport can cover long distances

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a short time because of high speed.

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means

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can travel from the outskirts of big cities to the

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everyday

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without any problems.

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, individuals can opt to live outside London and travel to work

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in the

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of a reliable and

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covenant

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system.

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, housing problems will not be an issue to a

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of

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as they will reside where ever they choose and

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again tackle overpopulation in major cities.

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it is of paramount importance to allocate funds to

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system as it is so effective in solving housing problems. In conclusion, in the contemporary world

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system plays a great role in our day to day lives. It is crucial to spend money on

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railway

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as

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will address a

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of issues being faced

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has been said, effective

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ssytem

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system

enables a brighter future with no busy, tiresome rush hours and an option to live outside the

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while

traveling

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to the

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everyday

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without any hustles.