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It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public. What would be the best solution to keep them open in your opinion

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to opine about your decision to
whether
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 sponsor our local children’s sports team or pay for two open-air concerts.
To begin
 with, let me tell you which improvements you would make
possible
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 for the sports team.
Firstly
, they could expand their activities, allowing more children to enrol. I know that every year dozens of infants are not accepted because of their limited space and staff. It would
also
 help them to buy new equipment,
such
 as balls and nets, leading to a better experience for the pupils. With regards to concerts, there are several positive outcomes. The main one would be the opportunity for the community to have a different source of entertainment, especially now that our local theatre is closed for refurbishment.
In addition
, it would possibly encourage youngsters to engage in artistic events. In my opinion, since there is no way to do both, the money should be used to sponsor the sports team because it has a significant impact on the children’s lives, not only physically, but
also
 mentally. We need to provide the best for the future of our community. I hope
this
 letter is useful to you and look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Arthur Oliveira
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