Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?

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The use

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of

cigarettes

is the main reason for many diseases

all

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overall

aroundall

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the world.

Forbitting

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Forbidding

the tobaccos by

goverment

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government

would be

precise

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a precise

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way for public wellness. I

definetely

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definitely

disagree with

this

idea and I will elaborate on my opinion in

further

paragraphs. In the world,

unfortunately

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,unfortunately

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many

people

have been smoking

cigarettes

and any other smoking products. I think it is impossible to avoid that and

this

is not

right

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the right

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way

in

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for

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many reasons.

Firstly

, all

people

burns

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as a free human and can make her own decisions included smoking cigarette.

Secondly

, what if

this

idea came true and government officials prohibited

use

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the use

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of

cigarettes

and any

of

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apply

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other smoking products. It will

probbably

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probably

result in unwanted consequences like

use

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the use

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of drugs

instead

of

cigarette

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a cigarette

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. I

unterstand

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understand

people

who think that avoiding tobacco consume would be

great

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a great

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thing for humanity. But, It could conclude many ramifications as I said.

Rising

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The rising

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of drug

use

would be too bad for

people

and there are lots of example about that.

For example

, in my country, there is no any ban

about

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on

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cigarettes

but every year there is a price increase on tobaccos and due to

this

rising many

people

prefer to

use

some cheap drugs relative to

legal

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the legal

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smoking product.

Therefore

, both mental and physical health

have

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has

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been in danger for

people

. In conclusion, I severely disagree with

this

proposal and I believe that

this

can cause reverse effects on

people

.

That is

why

government

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the government

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should not think

this

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about this

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implemention

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implementation

.