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people are becoming famous with the help of tv programmes and the internet .discuss the advantage and disadvantages .

#people #help #tv #programmes #internet #advantage
With the use of
technology
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people
 are becoming popular.
This
 helps
people
 to earn money by advertising. There are
also
 some
repurcussions
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repercussions
 of
this
,
people
 who become famous are unable to roam
independantly
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independently
 in crowdy places. On one side,
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 of the major
advantange
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advantage
 is
this
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that
people
 are able to raise income through the
popularity
 they have earned.
This
popularity
 will help them to be part of advertising
the
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commercial products. As they have earned
followers
,
people
 are more likely to follow them. If they
advice
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 them to use some products, they will buy these. Companies will hire them to increase their revenue.
This
 will help them to increase their income.
For instance
, On Instagram, if somebody has more than 10000
followers
, companies send them their products to post on it and in compensation they pay them a good amount.
Hence
,
popularity
 earned is beneficial as
this
 will help to increase sources of income. On the other side,
on
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 of the major disadvantage is that
people
 are unable to roam in crowdy places due to the
popularity
.
People
 who recognise them start talking to them. Often they gather around these
people
 because they like them. If there is a female celebrity, the cases of unwanted touching
also
 happen. They cannot shop alone from the market, their
followers
bothers
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 them and ask for photos. Their life is not as free as it was before being popular.
For example
, A big celebrity of India shared in an interview that he wants to go shopping
on
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 roadside markets but he cannot do
this
becuase
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because
 of his
followers
.
Therefore
, life does not remain
same
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the same
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 after earning
popularity
. In conclusion, earning stardom is easy
nowdays
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nowadays
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 due to
internet
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the internet
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 and other media but
this
 has some negative impacts too.
People
 can earn well because of
this
popularity
;
nevertheless
, they are unable to roam freely.
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