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people are becoming famous with the help of tv programmes and the internet .discuss the advantage and disadvantages .

#people #help #tv #programmes #internet #advantage
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people
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 are becoming popular.
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 helps
people
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 to earn money by advertising. There are
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 some
repurcussions
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repercussions
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,
people
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 who become famous are unable to roam
independantly
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independently
 in crowdy places. On one side,
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 of the major
advantange
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advantage
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that
people
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 are able to raise income through the
popularity
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 they have earned.
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popularity
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 will help them to be part of advertising
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commercial products. As they have earned
followers
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,
people
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 are more likely to follow them. If they
advice
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 them to use some products, they will buy these. Companies will hire them to increase their revenue.
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 will help them to increase their income.
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, On Instagram, if somebody has more than 10000
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, companies send them their products to post on it and in compensation they pay them a good amount.
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,
popularity
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 earned is beneficial as
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 will help to increase sources of income. On the other side,
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 of the major disadvantage is that
people
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 are unable to roam in crowdy places due to the
popularity
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.
People
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 who recognise them start talking to them. Often they gather around these
people
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 because they like them. If there is a female celebrity, the cases of unwanted touching
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 happen. They cannot shop alone from the market, their
followers
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bothers
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 them and ask for photos. Their life is not as free as it was before being popular.
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, A big celebrity of India shared in an interview that he wants to go shopping
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 roadside markets but he cannot do
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becuase
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because
 of his
followers
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.
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, life does not remain
same
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 after earning
popularity
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. In conclusion, earning stardom is easy
nowdays
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nowadays
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 due to
internet
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the internet
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 and other media but
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 has some negative impacts too.
People
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 can earn well because of
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popularity
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;
nevertheless
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, they are unable to roam freely.
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