The growth of the online shopping one day closure to shopping stores in cities. Do you agree or disagree with this.

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IN MODERN TIMES, THE ISSUE OF EFFECT OF ONLİNE SHOPPING HAS HIGHLY CONTROVERSIAL. THERE ARE THOSE WHO SAY THAT MALL STORES WOULD BE CLOSE
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YEARS BECAUSE OF CASE OF THES ONLINE SHOPPING ,
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OTHERS BELIEVE THAT THEY SHOULD BE NOT. IN
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ESSAY I WILL EXAMINE BOTH SIDES OF THE ARGUMENT AND PROVIDE MY OVERALL OPINION. GENERALLY SPEAKING, THERE IS A WIDE RANGE OF REASONS WHY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT FOLK JUST SHOULD BUY GOODS ON THE ONLİNE APPLICATION
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OF LOCAL WORKPLACE. PERHAPS THE MAIN REASON WHY PEOPLE ARE IN FAVOUR OF
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IDEA IS BECAUSE
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TYPE OF BUYING THINGS WANTING FOR BUSY PERSON IS QUITE EASILY. A GOOD ILLUSTRATION OF
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THAT HUMAN WORKING IN ANOTHER JOB SHOULD BE SPEND TIME FOR SEARCHING THINGS , WHICH IS WANTED BY HIM.
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, BY SPENDING LESS TIME, THEY SHOULD HAVE MORE AND MORE FREE DAYS . IF WE USE ONLINE SHOPPING APPLICATION TO BUY THINGS
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AS PHONE, T-SHIRT, JACKET, ETC. , WE HAVE A LOT OF LEISURE TO DEVELOP OURSELVES. DESPITE THESE ARGUMENTS, THERE IS
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A CASE FOR THE IDEA THAT STORE shopping centre IN THE CITIES , ESPECIALLY ON THE TOWN , SHOULD BE CLOSED
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YEARS DESPITE
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GROWTH OF ONLINE SHOPPING GO AHEAD. PERHAPS THE MAIN REASON WHY NATION THINK THAT
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IDEA IS that CLOTHES BUYING AS ONLINE COULD BE NOT TRIED BY PERSONS.
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WE KNOW INFO ABOUT THE OUR BODY, WE SHOULD SELECT WRONGLY IT ON THE ONLINE SHOPPING plaza
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AS COLOMBIA , WHİCH İS SO BIG FIRM ABOUT WINTER CLOTHES.
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, DESPITE NUMBERS OF ONLINE SHOPPING shopping centre SITES INCREASE RAPIDLY NOWADAYS, LOCAL SHOPS WILL NOT FINISHED COMPLETELY
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day. IF WE GO TO SHOPS ON OUR TOWN , WE SHOULD BE SUPPORT THESE WORKERS AND BUSINESSPERSON IN THESE PLACE. IN CONCLUSION ,
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IS A TOPIC WHICH IS VERY RELEVANT TO MODERN SOCIETY. MY PERSONAL VIEW IS THAT BOTH ONLINE WORKSHOP AND LOCAL STORES WILL NOT CLOSED BECAUSE OF DEMAND. IF A STORE MARKET THEIR PRODUCT IN BOTH ONLINE AND NON-ONLINE, THEY SHOULD BE VERY BIG FIRM THAN PAST DAYS.
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