With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

In recent times, the desire for petroleum and its derivatives have increased worldwide. It has

therefore

opened the conversation of

explorating

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exploring

exploration

uncharted territories for more

resources

. I strongly disagree with

this

point of view as I believe that the consequences of climate change

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far reaching

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and

also

the world already has enough exploited

resources

than it needs.

Firstly

, climate change has become a huge concern globally. Nation’s are in panic mode because the climate has exhibited certain tendencies that are unusual.

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, some states in the United States of America like Texas

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recently experienced the snow-storm.

This

phenomenon has not occurred in years,

therefore

, people have begun to voice their concerns about these changes. These changes can be attributed to various factors that have begun destroying the ozone layer of

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earth

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like; exploitation of places in search of crude oil,

also

the process to unearth and separate the products, fossil fuel burning contributes immensely to the destruction of our planet,

further

endangering the lives of the people.

Furthermore

, in terms of

resources

, I believe the world already has enough

than

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it needs. The government can invest financially

into

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scientific researches that are geared towards finding ways to maximise the

resources

available and how to convert its by-products for other essential purposes.

This

action would reduce the urge and need

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exploration of new places for

resources

.

For example

, many eco-friendly countries are constantly developing cars that do not need

petroleum like

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petroleum-like

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electric cars, computerised cars, steam enabled engines etc. If these options are considered and implemented by the government they can prevent unnecessary harm to our planet. In conclusion, it is true people would always seek to find hidden

resources

however

, it is

also

important to protect our planet because if it is destroyed by our ignorance and greed, it would be very tragic. In my opinion, I think that sensitisation to the issues that exploitation can cause is very important .