Education is not luxury, but basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree

Education
is a major factor to rise a better society Many believe that
education
should be one of the basic human rights and be available for everyone no matter what background they come from. I strongly advocate that
education
is not
luxury
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, as
i
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believe
education
can make
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enormous difference to
the
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society.
First
of all,
education
is a major factor for the
society
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meaning that the more individuals get proper
education
the more good things happen
for example
no violence and more respectful and loyal people to each other and their government Free
education
give
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students a chance to get their life together as everyone deserves a chance and the higher
education
they get the more job opportunities they receive. While there is no question that money is important and if the student can afford it the university could use it in the right place and make activities and it will help the government income.
However
free
education
should be a basic human right to get
better
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the better
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and modern country In conclusion,
education
should be a human right because not everyone could afford it and never considered
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a luxury.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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