The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

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There are millions of

vehicles

moving around the globe for

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ease of life since the

first

time a car arrived in

this

world. It is true that we should keep looking for

alternative

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and environment-friendly modes of transport,

however

, laws to restrict the use and purchase of

vehicles

cannot be of any help in

this

scenario as per me.

Although

excessive use of

vehicles

leads to more pollution and consumption of non-renewable sources of energy, it is facilitating many lives and livelihoods around the globe. From food supplies to clothes, water, sanitation facilities and so forth, everything requires

transportation

and

usage

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automobile

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has ensured that the basic facilities and products reach the remotest of areas where people reside.

Furthermore

transportation

connects human beings from different regions, with each other and that too in person and not just virtually. We are able to experience different cultures, cuisines and the diversity that the world has to offer through

this

miraculous invention. We must,

however

, search for renewable sources of fuel and energy and try to develop modes of transport that do not pollute and harm our habitat. We can

also

try to inculcate

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moral conduct in people for

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responsible use of

transportation

. In my opinion, any legal actions pertaining to usage and ownership of

vehicles

will only lead to more chaos.

Instead

, alternative sources to fuel,

innovation

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of environment-friendly automobiles and a sense of moral responsibility by those who are using the

transportation

would be far more helpful in today's time.

Transportation

is the life-line across the world and supports human life in many ways.

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