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More and more people today are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Therefore there is no longer any need to print books, magazines or newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #computers #devices #access #information #print #books #magazines #newspapers
IN MODERN TIMES , THE ISSUE OF
TECHNOGOLY
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TECHNOLOGY
 EFFECT ON SEARCHING INFO HAS BECOME HIGHLY CONTROVERSIAL. IT HAS BEEN SUGGESTED THAT HUMANS BEING JUST USE INTERNET TO FIND INFORMATION WANTING
INSTEAD
 OF
LIBRARY
 OR ETC. I PARTIALLY AGREE WITH
THIS
 IDEA, AND IN
THIS
 ESSAY I WILL PROVIDE SOME ARGUMENTS IN FAVOUR OF OPINION. GENERALLY SPEAKING, THERE IS A WIDE RANGE OF REASON WHY PUBLIC BELIEVE THAT SELECTING LAPTOP, SMARTPHONE TO SEARCH KNOWLEDGE IS QUITE IMPORTANT NOWADAYS. THE PRİMARY ARGUMENT SUPPORTING
THIS
 IDEA IS THAT TIME REQUIRING TO REACH ANYTHING KNOWLEDGE IS LESS THAN OTHER TYPES LİKE TO GO
LIBRARY
.
FOR EXAMPLE
, WHEN A POSTGRADUATE STUDENT MAKE THESIS DUTY TO GRADUATE FROM UNIVERSITY, HE OR SHE SHOULD NOT GO TO
LIBRARY
 TO STUDY HIM OR HER PROJECT.
AS A RESULT
 , AS PUPIL DO DO NOT GO TO
LIBRARY
 BUILDING , HE OR SHE SHOULD DO DUTY IN THE LESS TIME. IF WE HAVE LAPTOP WITH INTERNET, WE CAN STUDY OUR THESIS OR READ NEWS ON WEBSITE ,AS NOT BUY PAPERS.
HOWEVER
, IT MUST BE SAID THERE ARE SEVERAL ARGUMENTS
AGANIST
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AGAINST
THIS
 IDEA. PERHAPS THE STRONGEST OF THESE IS THAT GOING TO BOOKCASE IS MORE EFFECTIVE TO TEACH ANYTHING INFORMATION THAN LOOKING FOR AT THE
WEB SITES
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WEBSITES
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. BECAUSE THERE
ARE
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IS
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 A LOT OF EFFORT TO
REACH IT
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REACH-IT
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. IF WE SELECT TO USE BOOKCASE
INSTEAD
 OF WEBSITE ,
ALTHOUGH
 WE HAVE MORE TIMES, WE SHOULD LEARN
SUBJCET
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SUBJECT
 EFFECTIVELY. IN CONCLUSION, TECHNOLOGY EFFECT ON SEARCHING INFO IS A TOPIC WHICH IS VERY RELEVANT TO MODERN SOCIETY. I BELIEVE QUITE STRONGLY THAT SEARCH ENGINE
SUCH
 AS GOOGLE SHOULD DECREASE STRONG OF BOOKCASE
NEXT
 YEARS.
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