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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 present world,
government
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the government
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 has made many investments for the benefit of society in so many different sectors,
for instance
,
arts
, health, education. It
is disagreed
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disagrees
has disagreed
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 that
government
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the government
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 should only invest in public service.
Arts
 is equally important with public service.
This
 essay will prove
this
. To
eupark
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park
 Investing in the
arts
 has proven that it can come up with an enormous income.
For example
, any
country
 organizes a big event
such
 as a concert
this
 will help the
country
's economy and reputation. While there is no question that public service is important as well,
however
, investing in
arts
 well enhance
country
 culturally.
For example
, Saudi Arabia has launched a huge event in an old region called Olla. It draws a lot of foreign people's attention.
Nevertheless
,
arts
 are considered as one of the factors that help individuals to take a break from the hard work in life. It is
essintial
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essential
 to balance individuals' lives to keep the
country
 dramatically rising in so many sectors.
Although
,
arts
 present the
country
. It is important to maintain it. in conclusion , investing in
arts
 could have enormous rewards for the
country
 and it is necessary like public services.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural enrichment
  • expression of creativity
  • promote diversity
  • enhance social cohesion
  • boost tourism
  • job creation
  • stimulate economic growth
  • improve quality of life
  • essential services
  • maintenance and development
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