Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disavdantages to living in a house compared with living in an apaartment?

Owning an ideal place of dwelling is a dream of many.

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,people often get confused when it comes to selecting between an independent house or an apartment.I believe

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both options have their own advantages but owning a house is a much better choice considering the convenience and benefits it comes with. The

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of an independent abode is a privacy factor;as

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sort of dwellings are built on a private plot owing to which there will be no one above or below to disturb us and vice-versa.

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, every house has it's own backyard wherein children can play freely without any fear of anyone getting disturbed unlike in an apartment.Thereby,a bungalow makes a better choice for those who have a bigger family.

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,the private habitat provides more room to move around which makes it a more comfortable place to live in for inhabitants than an apartment because it has its own patio,laundry section,basement and so on.Whereas, apartments lack

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amenities.

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modern apartments do not even have balconies;

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proper storage space which makes it quite of a compromise to buyers. To conclude,considering the benefits of a private space of living,houses clearly outweighs its counterpart because choosing a place for the dwelling is very crucial for us as not only our's but life of our entire family members can be affected because of a compromised choice.