The obesity rates among teenagers have increased dramatically in many developed countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

Nowadays,

besides

the technology advancement, the world has been changing

drammatically

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dramatically

in term of diet, many

food

industries have foreseen the benefit of producing fast

food

in order to gain profits by introducing in an attractive way by its dedicated taste as well as generating a feeling of convenience to enjoy during peak hours. And

this

has been a domain cause for leading children to be over-weight and a dreadful habit of dining.

Hence

,

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article is to indicate the possible reasons together with the solution to the complication.

To begin

with, since the standard of living has been characterizing gradually

thus

this

quality has altered the custom of

food

consuming

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accompany of snacks,sodas and

fast

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food

restaurants

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contributed a huge impact to the devouring's style.

For example

, those famous junk

food

outlets like KFC, Mcdonald and Burger King have been drawing

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attention to the customer by the method of serving cooking in a swift time and a good appetite. Because of these factors which are the extra-nutrient values,

therefore

teenagers are presumed to be obese

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their early ages and

this

outcome can

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results

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in deteriorating the body's image.

On the other hand

, as the frequent rate of working has affected parent's life

rountine

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routine

consequently

they are not available to prepare a proper a meal for their children and some individuals even encourage the kids to order outside meal which is an unhealthy option and

this

action could practice an obsession for them.

Howevere

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However

, in

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general

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there are various methodologies of dealing

such

as inspiring juvenile to exercise or play sports.

Furthermore

, a statement of negatives about convenient junks can be applied on the account of guiding

community

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to an awareness. Basically, nourishing children from

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young age can be the best answer for the complication because the pattern of dining is the originator of directing them to the form of diet. To conclude, the flow of obesity among teenagers have dominated in many developed countries by

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virtue

of junk industries and the lack of monitoring in term of

food

consuming

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Also

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the explanations are accessible for solving the main issue.