Some people believe that family is more important than friends. To what extend do you agree or disagree
It is thought by some that the circle of family is more vital than the circle of friends around us. I completely agree with
this
statement.
To begin
with, on vital reason to consider that family is important is because they have mold
us to Change the verb form
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to
become who we are today. In Remove the redundancy
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orther
words, our parents, siblings and grandparents are the mentors of our values and beliefs systems. Correct your spelling
other
Thus
, a disciplined individual is grown owing to the guidance of family and not due to peers that they meet later on in life
. For example
, parents not only guide children to refrain from negative conduct but also
influence them through example. Therefore
, it is clear that ethical and moral elements stem through families than friends.
Another point to consider is that,
immediate blood relations are the saviours in crisis situations. Remove the comma
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For example
, in my personal experience, my parents have stood strong as a sheild
in turmoils that I have faced in Correct your spelling
shield
life
. Not only they have life
experiences to teach whats
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also
to provide unconditional support in challenging moments. Whereas, acquaintances can guide us only to a certain extent in such
situations. Hence
, emotional and financial assistance which are vital to a successful life
is mostly provided by our extended families.
In conclusion, although
friendship is imperative to an individual , most vital relationships stem through
our circle of blood relations. I am too of the opinion that they support our growth, inculcate ethical values and more importantly extend guidance in crisis situations. Change preposition
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Therefore
, it is pivotal to protect these
type of bonds.Change the determiner
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