Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge right and wrong and to behave well. Some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

few decades have seen heated arguments about the responsibility of
in the classroom.
some people believe that the lectures should interest in the behaviour side as the academic side, other people claim that
should just focus on the academic part. I stand with the
opinion and I believe that merits are more than demerits. On the one hand, the assistant spend more hours with students than their families and education is strongly connected with moral principles, so the students will get their ethics from their
, the long life which pupils have spent in their school makes free time for them and
is the main required reasons to learn how to recognise with each other and distinguish from black and white.
For instance
, every educational institution has a break time when all learners are connected together, so the
will provide structure for students to insurance the respects between them.
On the other hand
, other parents think that the study period does not cover all academic materials which must be taken from pupils.
can not lose any time in the lecture for any social purposes or to talk about any behaviours which must be included in every person in
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, some parents may believe in ideas different from
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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