Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some

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traditions in

society

should be followed by youngsters.

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other views, they have a right to live in their own ways.

This

essay will discuss both sides of the arguments, personally, I will

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explain why both vital elements for youngsters On the one hand, some traditional value

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certainly applicable to the modern world.

To begin

with,

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some activities day-to-day like

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greeting culture with

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person to show respect toward them

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is a cultural tradition from generation to generation.

This

is especially true for relations between multi-generation in a family as well as

society

.

Moreover

, it is important to dress modestly in the special place of worship as church, temples,

this

shows appreciation for God or their ancestors.

Although

society

changes,

people

should remain some traditional values

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cannot change, it is a foundation rule necessary in their life.

On the other hand

, in spite of some values of the other view given about, I believe that youngers

also

should be free to do anything that they want appropriately.

Firstly

, young

people

are living in a fast-paced world very different from the old generations, almost the culture and tradition are outdated,

therefore

, unfaired to them follow.

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the reasons, changing their lifestyles is one of the light

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to assist young generations from fast adapting to new environments and developing, even able to enhance their innovation and creativity.

Secondly

, removing barriers from

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social and old-fashioned prejudice will lead to gender

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in youngsters.

For example

, As a default, women continue to form a large majority of the working poor, earn less income, voiceless than men,

therefore

, girl teenagers should have their own roads to prove the position and power of women in

society

today. In conclusion, good traditions should be passed on and young

people

should respect these traditions, but they should combine with their innovation new things. I concede that each view

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their meaning, so balancing it can become a perfect person.