Some people believe that to give opportunities to the new generation companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, some people are of the opinion that,
top level
workers in organisations who are older than 55 years, should be supported to retire in order to give more opportunities to the younger Add a hyphen
top-level
generation
. I disagree with this
point of view as I believe that, the older employees
are valuable assets and they also
have an important role to play in the lives of the new generation
.
Firstly
, older employees
should not be encouraged to retire if they are not willing to. For example
, these people have sacrificed their time, their youth and also
used their talents to achieve the feat to become high level
Add a hyphen
high-level
employees
. Overtime
they have added value Into making the organisation through hard Correct your spelling
Over time
work
and diligence to make it successful hence
, their role at the helms of affairs therefore
, their retirement should be their decision to make.
Secondly
, the younger generation
have
a lot to learn from older Change the verb form
has
employees
. For instance
, these top level
staffs probably worked at a time when technology was still budding and Add a hyphen
top-level
therefore
, they did not have to depend on the internet for the informations
needed to achieve Change the wording
information
pieces of information
success
which I think the new Add an article
the success
generation
can learn from because these days, they rely on the internet for every solution without putting real thought or hard work
into their jobs. I think they should earn the opportunities rather than have it
handed to them at the expense of hardworking individuals that have paved the way for them .
To conclude, the older Correct pronoun usage
them
generation
should be viewed as important in the work force
because the outcome of the new Correct your spelling
workforce
generation
in terms of work
ethic and thinking capabilities depend on it. In my opinion
I think it is rather unfair to encourage older Add a comma
,opinion
employees
to retire if they are not willing to.Submitted by ochuksemeordiblessing on
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