Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In

this

present world, the usage of technology is constantly on the rise. Even shoppers are among the beneficiaries of technology. The argument that some

people

now prefer to do their grocery shopping online rather than in the supermarkets is

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viewpoint

that is

both agreed

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disagreed by many. The two sides of

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arguments will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in

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essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion. On one hand, the advancement of technological applications have made

people

's lives easier because they are capable of understanding human needs

then

suggesting options and solutions.

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, shopping online has become a trend because there are numerous applications that can now assist shoppers with an accuracy

that is

second

to none because of the

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of options available for satisfaction at just a touch of a bottom.

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people

have their needs met just by making a simple action.

On the other hand

, many

people

still prefer to make shopping trips to the supermarket. There are many reasons for

this

approach

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instance, many

people

prefer to select their products themselves because they can decide on what options they like better in person. Another reason could be that they are specific about some ingredients

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due to allergies or religious beliefs. To give a clear example, A Muslim person prefers halal products,

therefore

if they do not carry out their shopping activities themselves, they might be given the wrong products that do not complement their religious beliefs.

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, going directly to the supermarket prevents

this

from happening. To summarise, the two sides of the argument concerning shoppers and their preferences

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shopping online or at the supermarket have strong support.

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, it is widely known that no one would put the right amount of patience into sourcing

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items for you except you do it yourself. It is

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predicted that

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of the debate over online shopping will always be greater than the advantages because human needs are insatiable.