Many believe that individuals can do little to improve environment. Only government and large companies can make real difference.

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Many believe that individuals can do little to improve environment. Only government and large companies can make real difference.

Your opinion

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In some time countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

Write a letter to a friend to inform him/her about a job opening in your company. Describe the job; 1) write about the job. 2) How is it suitable for your friend? 3) How to apply for the job.

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience