Many believe that individuals can do little to improve environment. Only government and large companies can make real difference.
Better
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A better
environment
is indispensable to live healthy
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a healthy
life
. Some Replace the word
lives
people
argue that the improvement of our surroundings are
only possible with the contribution of our Change the verb form
is
Government
' law, regulations and multi-national companies
, not with the aid of common people
. This
essay will argue why government
and big corporations have entirely
paramount role in the growth of the Add an article
an entirely
environment
.
To begin
with, individuals can do a lot of things to reduce environmental issues such
as,
trash garbage, recycling and many other things. Remove the comma
apply
However
, people
are responsible for the polluted environment
. They have to try to decline the use of vehicles which they use for commuting. A single person can do something for
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about
this
problem. For instance
, if every masses grow one tree in his life, that make good
impact on these obstacles.
Despite, some benefits of the effort of common Add an article
a good
people
, Government
as well as large
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, as well as large companies,
companies
can do multitudinous things for this
trouble. Like, plastic wastage coupons be
banned by Change the verb form
are
Government
rules plus companies
can make environment friendly
products Add a hyphen
environment-friendly
which
will not be harmful. Correct pronoun usage
that
Secondly
, these two campaigns are well- known and they can spread awareness among common people
. For instance
, last
year,Tata birla
, Change the capitalization
Birla
well known
industry organized a show in every town of India about the awareness of Add a hyphen
well-known
environment
issues, masses get lessons about deforestation and greenhouse problems. Some Replace the word
environmental
people
unfamiliar with these because of illiteracy.
To conclude, this
essay argued that government
plus big Correct article usage
the government
companies
can do miracles in this
obstacle. And I am totally agree
with it because it is not Change the verb form
totally agree
game
of normal Add an article
a game
the game
people
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