Many believe that individuals can do little to improve environment. Only government and large companies can make real difference.

Better
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environment
is indispensable to live
healthy
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life
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. Some
people
argue that the improvement of our surroundings
are
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only possible with the contribution of our
Government
' law, regulations and multi-national
companies
, not with the aid of common
people
.
This
essay will argue why
government
and big corporations have
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paramount role in the growth of the
environment
.
To begin
with, individuals can do a lot of things to reduce environmental issues
such
as
,
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trash garbage, recycling and many other things.
However
,
people
are responsible for the polluted
environment
. They have to try to decline the use of vehicles which they use for commuting. A single person can do something
for
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this
problem.
For instance
, if every masses grow one tree in his life, that make
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impact on these obstacles. Despite, some benefits of the effort of common
people
,
Government
as well as large
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, as well as large companies,
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companies
can do multitudinous things for
this
trouble. Like, plastic wastage coupons
be
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banned by
Government
rules plus
companies
can make
environment friendly
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products
which
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will not be harmful.
Secondly
, these two campaigns are well- known and they can spread awareness among common
people
.
For instance
,
last
year,Tata
birla
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,
well known
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industry organized a show in every town of India about the awareness of
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issues, masses get lessons about deforestation and greenhouse problems. Some
people
unfamiliar with these because of illiteracy. To conclude,
this
essay argued that
government
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plus big
companies
can do miracles in
this
obstacle. And I
am totally agree
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with it because it is not
game
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a game
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of normal
people
.
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