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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views .

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In
this
 modern era,
animals
 are vital for economic and
enviromental
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environmental
 purpose.
Although
 many people
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 that it is not right to keep
creatures
 who cannot speak,
other
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 says that
zoo
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the zoo
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 is fundamental for entertainment and ecological balance in
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society.
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both
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 sides of why to keep them in
cage
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 and they are paramount for the community in many ways. Keeping wildlife in zoos will protect them against predators, bad weather, and food availability.
Nevertheless
, keeping
animals
 free is more logical than isolating them because if we keep them caged, they would not be able to have fresh air and chase other
animals
.
Therefore
, it is cruel to keep them confined in small spaces. It is advisable to put our efforts into keeping our
creatures
 in their natural habitats, in order to give them the opportunity to experience a normal life. Keeping
animals
 is essential because some are in fact becoming extinct.
Although
 keeping these
creatures
 is costly, the profits made by keeping them are substantial. Take Indian lions
for example
; a wide range of people travel to India to watch in circuses.
However
, some people think that governments should invest money in improving the infrastructure of their nations
instead
. Building a new electrical power station,
for instance
, is more important than spending thousands of pounds to preserve certain
creatures
 from extinction.
Lastly
, keeping
animals
 is important for study and research whereas others think we have no right to use it for entertainment and in labs. To conclude, keeping
animals
 in zoos might have many values but it is irrational to keep these
animals
 away from their natural habitat. The reasons are that
besides
 they are not vulnerable
creatures
, they have the right to survive independently because of having feelings and emotions as human.
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