SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE MAIN ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEM OF OUR TIME IS THE LOSS OF PARTICULAR SPECIES OF PLANTS AND ANIMALS. OTHERS SAY THAT THERE ARE MORE IMPORTANT ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

It has long been a subject of contention that whether

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extinction

of a specific type of vegetation and

animals

is the primary issues of the surroundings or other challenges of the surroundings are significant.

Although

both the notions have pros and cons, I believe that the latter

one

has several strong elements that deserve attention and in

this

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I will explain why.

To begin

with, there are a large number of reasons why

loss

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of

a

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specific

plants

and

animals

is the main problem of the

environment

,

one

of which is

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of the ecosystem. As

kind

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of plans and

animals

have a part in the ecosystem and if

one

of their existence is lost, not only will

this

affect the process of

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, but

also

have

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effect on nature. Bees in vegetation and farming,

for example

, are the key agent in the process of proliferation in

plants

, and if they are extinct

then

the ration of fertilization of

plants

will

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the growth of the natural vegetation in

forest

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the forest

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, and even in agriculture as the

plants

will not be able to bear fruits. Apparently,

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of species will affect

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the cycle of the

environment

. Despite the merits offered by the role of

plants

and

animals

in the

environment

, there are

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other problems in the

environment

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cannot be overlooked. The primary

one

stems from the fact that can deforestation can cause to

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nature. Unlike deforestation, which can cause various natural disaster as landslide, flood, and the like, and

casue

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cause

mass casualty for both the

environment

and human beings,

loss

of a plant and animal, does not have immediate destruction of the

environment

. Another pitfall is

the

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air pollution which degrades the ozone layer and allows harmful rays on the earth and is responsible for

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climate change. To recapitulate,

although

the

loss

of species has some effects on the planet, other predicaments like felling the trees need more focus as they cannot be ignored.