It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about culture and people, because people can learn from books, films or the internet. Do you agree or disagree?
The word globlisation is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.
The word technonlgy is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.
The spelling of airplane is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
The noun phrase bus seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The double comparative more and more stronger may be repetitive. Consider changing this to the appropriate comparative form.
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It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase human being seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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The word differnet is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.
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The word schedual is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.
The noun phrase city seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that the verb get should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.
It appears that the verb connect should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.
It appears that the form of the verb help does not work with is in this sentence.
The word stressful doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The word really doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
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The noun phrase long time seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The word really doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
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Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.