It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about culture and people, because people can learn from books, films or the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

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globalisation
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and the development of
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technology

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growing fast . The
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,train,
bus
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the bus
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is becoming
more and more stronger
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stronger

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inch by inch. There are thousands
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countries
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countires
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and cities in the world. As
human
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being ,we have to
contuine
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continue

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to learn
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different

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cultures from different
people
.
Hence
, from my perspective ,I disagree with the statement about
travel
is
unnecessary
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schedual
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schedule

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in our life.
First
and foremost, we have to work very late from 9am-8pm by every weekday.
Moreover
, we need to stay with our children or improve our personal skills.
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, we usually live in
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the city
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and less chance
get
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connect
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with nature park.
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,
travel
is not only help
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us to reduce
stressful
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but
also
we can meet up
different
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with different

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people
and learn diversity cultures from
travel
. When
people
travel
all over the world , the
people
will reflective themself and get know more about themself and they open their horizon and they can get
really
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experience from
travel
.
Conversly
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Conversely

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, the book ,
fimls
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films
film

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and the internet is only for watching through the screen and paper ,it can't see really word and no one can communicate with you face to face .
Moreover
, if we watch all of them
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a

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long time ,it will harmful to our eyes, specific to children. In
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conclusion

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,
people
can learn
culture
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about culture

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through
the
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apply

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books ,film and
internet
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the internet

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, but they can't get
really
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experience .
Therefore
,
travel
is an essential aspect for
people
. Experience is a vital point for
everyting
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everything

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