An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many prblems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs. why d you think so many children are overweight ? what could be done to solve this problem ?

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In today’s scenario, it is undeniable fact that the number of obese children is increasing day by day in modern society due to that it could
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some causes related to their health and
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health care expenses,whilst they become elder people,
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I will discuss why it is happening and how to overcome
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. To embark with,there are plenty of reasons why it is arising.
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and foremost reason to support my ideology is that these days most
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live in sedentary lifestyle because they all are spending too much time at home and playing some mobile games as well as other indoor games,which is not only increasing obesity
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impact on their eyes.Another pivotal argument is that regular consumption of junk
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causes weight gain in adolescents.To quote an example,60% of the US teenagers are
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out of which 70% are the victims of
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of fast
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,parents play
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, so if guardian
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their juvenile to eat some nutrition
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.To illustrate,more than 52%
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children are malnourished,which is
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of
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cases. Agglomerating all the points elaborated above, it can be concluded that eating fast
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concern to hike obesity
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in entire globe,
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consuming vegetables and dry fruits are
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way to alleviate by its roots.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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