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Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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The "pen and
paper
"
test
 methods have been the most widely used measure to
determind
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determine
 the study level of students but some individuals argue that
this
 is not the most ideal way.
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 essay is
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discuss
this
 argument and put forward my personal perspective
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 the reason why I agree with
this
 statement.
To begin
 with, I firmly believe that
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traditional testing is the most universal mean of assessing skills. Since almost every school and institution can provide a piece of
paper
 and a pen when they have the need
of
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 examinations.
This
 is undoubtedly cost-effective compared with other approach owing to the fact that it usually does not require any device or a strict environment.
As a result
, the
paper
-based testing system has played
an
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 critical role in our history of education and helped to spread knowledge across many regions. In another word, it contributed to the achievement of technologies and globalization. Despite the fact the "pen and
paper
" tests have the convenience's advantage, it is
hardly
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 to
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 method. A considerable number of abilities is difficult to be assessed through a
test
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a
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paper
.
For instance
, the text-based driver
test
 is
neccessary
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necessary
 but a road
test
 is still required to decide whether if a driver is qualified to manual a vehicle on open roads.
Furthermore
, occupations
such
 as a chief, artist, and football player
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 more than
a
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 examination to be evaluated. In conclusion, I am convinced that there are substantial arguments to support that a traditional
paper
-based
test
 is not the most ideal way to
determind
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determine
 participants' skill level. Because there are a large number of occupations demand more than a
paper
 examination to consider qualified.
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